Introducing myself

Hello, teacher! Sorry about this of late time. First of all, I was so happy and pleasant to talk with you. I'm so hard for speaking English..T.T However, If I study with you for a long time, I think it'll be possible to speak my thinking in short time. I'll believe you and me^^ <Homework> Hello, I'll introduce myself. Fist of all, My name is [Name] KIM as Korean name. I'm 23 years old and I'm in senior class. So nowdays, I'm preparing to get a job. My major is Mechanical Engineering, so my target company is Hyundai Automobile And in there, I want to research and develop some technology about safety. And now, I'll introduce my family. My family members are parents, older brother and older sister. My father is businessman in pharmaceutical company and my mother is housewife. She is very good at cooking^^. And my older brother is banker and he married last year. At last, my older sister is doctor. She is intern at KyungHee university hospital. And I'm the youngest..haha....

A fun-filled Friday morning to you Ms. [이름]! ^^ I am pleased to meet and talk with you. I know that it will take a long time for you to become a good English speaker but as they say\"PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE and PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT.\" It will take a lot of patience, practice and on more important thing, CONFIDENCE. So do not be afraid to speak in Englsih and commit mistakes. That is really a part of learning. Once you do all those things, I am pretty sure that you will become a better one. An I do promise you that I am going to do my very best to help you with that. ^^ I also believe in you and me.   With regards to composition, I commend you for sahring a good one. Just be careful when you capitalize. You should know when to capliatize a word or a letter. And one more thing, you need to know when to use ARTICLES (a,an,the) and prepositions too.   So if you have questions, don\'t hesitate to ask me during our class. I am looking forward to have a fruitful class with you everyday. I\'ll see you later!    wake up wakeup!   Always, Kathrine ^^     Hello, teacher! >> CORRECT (***proper use of punctuation) Sorry about this of late time. >> Sorry for answering my homework late. First of all, I was so happy and pleasant to talk with you. >> CORRECTI\'m so hard for speaking English..T.T >> It\'s so hard for me to speak in English. T.THowever, If I study with you for a long time, I think it\'ll be possible to speak my thinking in short time. >> CORRECT >> OR: However, if I am going to study with you for a long time, I tink that it\'ll be possible for to speak out my thoughts in a short time. I\'ll believe you and me^^>> I believe in you and me. <Homework> Hello, I\'ll introduce myself. >> CORRECT Fist of all, My name is [Name] KIM as Korean name. >> First of all, my Korean name is Suhyun Kim. I\'m 23 years old and I\'m in senior class. >> CORRECT >> OR: I\'m 23 years old and I am a senior in the university. So nowdays, I\'m preparing to get a job. >> So nowadays, I\'m preparing to get a job. My major is Mechanical Engineering, so my target company is Hyundai Automobile And in there, I want to research and develop some technology about safety. >> My major is mechanical engineering, so my target company is Hyundai Automobile. I want to research and develop a technology about safety once I will be there. And now, I\'ll introduce my family. >> CORRECT My family members are parents, older brother and older sister. >> CORRECTMy father is businessman in pharmaceutical company and my mother is housewife. >> My father is a business man in a pharmaceutical company and my mother is a housewife. She is very good at cooking^^. >> CORRECTAnd my older brother is banker and he married last year.>> My older brotehr is a baker and he amrried last year. At last, my older sister is doctor. >> And my older sisiter is a doctor. She is intern at KyungHee university hospital. >> She is an intern in Kyunghee University Hospital. And I\'m the youngest..haha.... >> And at last, I\'m the youngest.. haha...