introducing myself

2018-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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i have a desire that i speak english so fluently. i envy someone who speak english very well as a second language. they might try hard. so i admire their effort and i wanna be a guy like them. recently, i have watched youtube about english contents. i try to make a environment and mood for studying english. i trust my passion but, i have a weakness. when i speak english in front of people, i'm so shy. it's okay for me to speak korean in front of people. but, speaking english is little bit awkward. when i had lived in phillipine for a month, i spoke english naturally, i wasn't shy. at that time, i thought i could speak english like native in a year. but it's not easy. anyway, i need more confidence. i shouldn't fear speaking english. as my teacher give me a confidence, i would better speak english.

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i have a desire that i speak english so fluently. i envy someone who speak english very well as a second language. they might try hard. so i admire their effort and i wanna be a guy like them.
recently, i have watched youtube about english contents. i try to make a environment and mood for studying english. i trust my passion
>> I
have a desire to speak English fluently. I envy someone who speaks English very well as a second language. They might have been trying their best. So I admire their effort and I want be a guy like them.
 Recently, I have watched YouTube with English contents. I try to make an environment and a mood for studying English. I trust my passion.

but, i have a weakness. when i speak english in front of people, i\'m so shy. it\'s okay for me to speak korean in front of people. but, speaking english is little bit awkward. when i had lived in phillipine for a month, i spoke english naturally, i wasn\'t shy. at that time, i thought i could speak english like native in a year. but it\'s not easy.
>> But or However
, I have a weakness. When I speak English in front of people, i\'m so shy. it\'s okay for me to speak korean in front of people. but, speaking english is little bit awkward. when i had lived in phillipine for a month, i spoke english naturally, i wasn\'t shy. at that time, i thought i could speak english like native in a year. but it\'s not easy.
anyway, i need more confidence. i shouldn\'t fear speaking english.
>> Anyway, I need more confidence and I shouldn\'t fear speaking English.
as my teacher give me a confidence, i would better speak english.

>>As my teacher, please give me more confidence, I want to speak in English better.

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