Introducing myself

2019-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi, My name is [Name] and my english name is Leah. I have lived in Paris since 3 years for studying and for staying more longer. I\'m studying accounting and finance in CNAM. l\'m on second degree. My hobby is to dance, to do sport, to hang out with few friends (since I don\'t like a big group for hanging out), to go to concerts or music events, to find brand new restaurant etc. I decided to start the English conversation class because I felt that my english skill is degraded. I thought it\'s regretful to lose my english even though I had studied for years. My expectation for the english class is to improve my language skill and prepare myself for futur profession because I long for working in international environment. For now, I\'m in debate class however, I\'d like to do also business class if I start a job here ! I hope so ! See you ~

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Hi,

My name is [Name] and my english name is Leah. 

>> My name is [Name] and my English name is Leah.
 I have lived in Paris since 3 years for studying and for staying more longer. 

>> I have been living here in Paris for almost 3 years to pursue my degree and to stay longer.
 I\'m studying accounting and finance in CNAM. l\'m on second degree. 

>> I\'m studying accounting and finance in CNAM and I\'m on my second year. 
 My hobby is to dance, to do sport, to hang out with few friends (since I don\'t like a big group for hanging out), to go to concerts or music events, to find brand new restaurant etc. 

>> My hobbies are dancing, sports, and hanging out with my few friends (since I don\'t like hanging out with big group). I also like going to concerts or music events, checking out newly-opened restaurant and a lot more.

 I decided to start the English conversation class because I felt that my english skill is degraded. I thought it\'s regretful to lose my english even though I had studied for years. 

>> I decided to take English conversation class because I felt that my English skill declining/weakening. I thought that, it will be regretful if I lose my English skills for I had studied for years.
 My expectation for the english class is to improve my language skill and prepare myself for futur profession because I long for working in international environment. 

>> My expectation from the English class is to improve my language skill and prepare myself for my professional career because I long to work in an international company.
 For now, I\'m in debate class however, I\'d like to do also business class if I start a job here ! I hope so !
>> For now, I\'m having a debate class however, I\'d like to also take a business class if I start a job here! I hope so ! 

See you ~

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