Introducing myself
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Hi,
My name is [Name] and my english name is Leah.
>> My name is [Name] and my English name is Leah.
I have lived in Paris since 3 years for studying and for staying more longer.
>> I have been living here in Paris for almost 3 years to pursue my degree and to stay longer.
I\'m studying accounting and finance in CNAM. l\'m on second degree.
>> I\'m studying accounting and finance in CNAM and I\'m on my second year.
My hobby is to dance, to do sport, to hang out with few friends (since I don\'t like a big group for hanging out), to go to concerts or music events, to find brand new restaurant etc.
>> My hobbies are dancing, sports, and hanging out with my few friends (since I don\'t like hanging out with big group). I also like going to concerts or music events, checking out newly-opened restaurant and a lot more.
I decided to start the English conversation class because I felt that my english skill is degraded. I thought it\'s regretful to lose my english even though I had studied for years.
>> I decided to take English conversation class because I felt that my English skill declining/weakening. I thought that, it will be regretful if I lose my English skills for I had studied for years.
My expectation for the english class is to improve my language skill and prepare myself for futur profession because I long for working in international environment.
>> My expectation from the English class is to improve my language skill and prepare myself for my professional career because I long to work in an international company.
For now, I\'m in debate class however, I\'d like to do also business class if I start a job here ! I hope so !
>> For now, I\'m having a debate class however, I\'d like to also take a business class if I start a job here! I hope so !
See you ~
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