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Hello Richard,
Great job in your homework!!!
I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn every day. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need. You can do it if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny
While you are in Chuncheon city, if you want to see historical tracks of Korea then visit here.
>>If you will go in Chuncheon City, you can see the historical tracks of Korea.
Artifacts displaying are not much compare with National museum of Korea in Seoul, but enough to take a view of history about Gangwon province.
>>Artifacts displayed in the museum are not much compared to the National Museum of Korea in Seoul but it\'s enough to take a view about the history of Gangwon province.
Above all here attractive point is cozy atmosphere and child friendly program.
>>Above all the most important point is the cozy atmosphere and the child-friendly program.
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