introduction
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Hi [이름]!
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I would like to introduce myself with 2 words.
>>I would like to introduce myself in 2 words.
First, I’m a global player.
I traveled to India for a month, and studied in Alabama, U.S.
>>I traveled to India for a month, and studied in US, Alabama.
In both situations, there was hard to find Korean or Korean market.
>>During those times, It was hard to meet Koreans and Korean groceries or market.
But I was and still is willing to adjust to new environment, meeting various people and which made me understand their culture.
>>But I survived with my willingness to learn and adjust to a new environment.
I've met various people with diffirent cultures and it helped me a alot to understand their way of living.
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