introduction
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for sending this composition. :)
Go over the corrections and I will see you
tomorrow. :)
T. Glenda
The reason why i want to study english is
improving my english skills like pronanciation, stucture of sentences, various expressions and then getting a job.
>> The reason why I want to study English is to improve my pronunciation, the structure of my sentences, to learn various expressions and finally getting a job.
my strength is the confidence to speak english.
>> My strength is my confidence in speaking English.
my weakness is the shortage of expressions.
>> My weakness is the limited expressions that I know.
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