Introduction myself

My name is [Name] Eo. Iam 31 years old. i was brought up in Soul. Then i moved from Seoul to Kimpo, because my sister got married last year, so we dont need many rooms anymore. As i mentioned, i have one older sister and i amd the youngest in family. I already graduated from university 4 years ago. My major is architecture. While i was in school, i had many chances to work as a part timer. After graduation, i worked in office as a structure enginner. I amd an ambitious person who has strong leadership skills, because i have been a worship leader in chrch for 10 years. In addition, i went to the Philippines and Australia to study English. It was great time n made me grow up. In my free time, i usually play the guitar at home adn watch movies.

Hello [이름]! Really you are a worship leader? I was once a worship leader too! I also play the drums in the church. ^^kk I was mentioning about "typographical errors" and "capitalizations". Have a nice day! -Tiny^0^v   My name is [Name] Eo. >> Correct.I am 31 years old. >> Correct. i was brought up in Seoul. >> Take note of the capitalization of "i" >> Correct. Then i moved from Seoul to Kimpo, because my sister got married last year, so we dont need many rooms anymore. >> Take note the capitalization of "i">> Correct. As i mentioned, i have one older sister and i amd the youngest in family. >> Take note the capitalization of "i">> As I mentioned, I have an older sister and I am the youngest in the family.I already graduated from university 4 years ago. >> Correct My major is architecture. >> Correct. While i was in school, i had many chances to work as a part timer. >> Take note the capitalization of "i">> Correct. After graduation, i worked in office as a structure enginner. >> Take note the capitalization of "i" >> spelling check: engineer>> After graduation, I worked in an office as a Structure Engineer.I am an ambitious person who has strong leadership skills, because i have been a worship leader in church for 10 years.>> Correct. In addition, i went to the Philippines and Australia to study English. >> Take note the capitalization of "i" >> Correct.It was great time n made me grow up. >> I had a great time and it made me grow up (or mature).In my free time, i usually play the guitar at home and watch movies. >> Take note the capitalization of "i" >> Correct