Introduction of my house

Hi again^^

Well, thanks for the tour Mr. [Name]!

What I love about it, is your desk near the window.

I have placed my working table beside the window too in my place.

It does help me clear my mind when I\'m stressed and when I wanted to build a magical imagination (hehe)

Here are your corrections and if there are any thoughts or sentences that I didn\'t understand please feel free to tell me.

My favorite room in my house is my room.

>>CORRECT!

It is not big. And it’s not luxurious.

>>It is not big and it is not luxurious.

Instead, it’s very small and simple. But I love it.

>>Instead, it is very small and simple, but I like it.
My room faces due south, and it has a big window. So my room is very bright and cozy.

>>My room faces south, and I have a big window, so my room is very bright and cozy.

Near the window.

>>It\'s near the window.

I placed my desk because I want to look out the window to clear my head while studying.

>>I placed my desk near the window to help me clear my head while studying.

Right beside the desk, you can see my new computer, which I treasure a lot.

>>Right next to the desk, you can see my new computer in which I treasure.

And on the opposite side of the desk and the computer, there’s my bed.

On the wall, I put a few picture of myself and my favorite sport star.

>>I put some pictures of me and my favorite sports star on the wall.

On the other wall, there’s a bookshelf.

>>On the other wall is a bookshelf.
Actually, I’m very satisfied with my room.

>>CORRECT!

Yet if I had a bigger room. It could be even better.

>>But if there\'s a bigger room, it could be better.