Introduction of my office
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning again Mr. [Name]!
Finally, here are my corrections to your composition. I\'m sorry it took me so long. ^^
Now I fully understand about how your office works. Thanks to your explanation.
I appreciate the fact that you exerted effort to explain it to me, so thank you.
Hope to see you tomorrow then! You always take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Today, I would like to introduce my office KESI.
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27 member of employees are working in my office now.
>> There are 27 employees working now in my office.
My office is a branch located in Dea-jeon city and there are 19 branches throughout Korea.
>> My office\'s branch is located in Daejeon city and there are 19 branches all over Korea.
In general, my office is consist of three parts, the first team and second team and administrative team that is consist of administrative personnels.
>> In general, my office consists of three parts; the first team and second team, and the administrative team which consists of the administrative personnel.
Every employee has responsibily of the inspectation of the elevator except the administrative team.
>> Every employee\'s responsibility is the inspection of elevators except for the administrative team.
Administrative team\'s main duty is to receive the registration of inspection of elevators and the accountancy.
>> The administrative team\'s main duty is to receive the registration of inspection of elevators and the accountants.
Three women employees ae not the inspector.
>> There are 3 women employees but they are not inspectors.
If a sertain building owner summits the application of the elevator, they accept the document and hand in the document to schedule team belong to the first team.
>> If a certain building owner submits the application of the elevator, they accept the document and hand over the document to the scheduling team which belongs to the first team.
Personnel who are in charge of the work schedule receive the document from the administrative team and adjust the schedule.
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