Introduction of myself

Hello, How are you? Nice to meet you. I'll introduce myself. My name is [이름]. I am [Name] Worker. I am married and I have a son. I work in the Rehabilitation center. I worked for 15 years. My husband is a Social Worker too. My husband work in elderly welfare center. My son is in elementary school. He is 11 years old. My hooby is playing the piano and singing. I wish to speak English well. Because I prepare for the International Worshop. I need to talk with the foreign instructor. I'm glad to start learning English. Learn English the fun. I'm happy. I am grateful to Jane teacher. Thank you very much.

Thank you for sending your first composition and thank you for choosing our company. We wish to give you a worthwhile experience. Let\'s do our best to learn English the fun way! The \'compositions\' are how we extend more help to our students. Please review the red items and take note of the corrections. Rest well and talk to you tomorrow. Always, T. Jane   Hello, How are you? >>CORRECT Nice to meet you. >>CORRECTI\'ll introduce myself. >>This is an introduction of myself.My name is [이름]. >>CORRECT I am [Name] Worker. >>I am a social worker. I am married and I have a son. >>CORRECTI work in the Rehabilitation center. >>I work in a rehabilitation center. I worked for 15 years. >>I worked there for 15 years now.My husband is a Social Worker too. >>CORRECT >>OR: My husband is also a social worker. My husband work in elderly welfare center. >>My husband works in an elderly welfare center.My son is in elementary school. >>My son is in elementary. >>My son attends an elementary school.He is 11 years old. >>CORRECTMy hooby is playing the piano and singing. >>My hobbies are playing the piano and singing.I wish to speak English well. >>CORRECT Because I prepare for the International Worshop. >>I am preparing for an international workshop.I need to talk with the foreign instructor. >>CORRECTI\'m glad to start learning English. >>CORRECT Learn English the fun. >>I want to learn English the fun way. I\'m happy. >>CORRECT >>OR: I\'m a happy person.I am grateful to Jane teacher. >>I am grateful for Teacher Jane. Thank you very much. >>CORRECT