Introduction of myself(is it correct?)

Hi again^^

I think it\'s not bad to tell about your school or where you from during an introduction. 

Most of the time we talked about our interests or the things we love, but this one is okay too.

So, here are your corrections ^^

Introduction of myself

>>My Self-Introduction

Hi Fiona, It\'s [이름]!

>>CORRECT!

I should\'ve written down my introduction during last night but i impulsively fell into sleep.

>>I should have written my introduction last night, but I fell asleep on impulse.
By the way, let\'s go for my introduction.

>>By the way, let\'s go to my introduction.
 I think it is inappropriate to give my personel information something like \'Where i\'m from or what is my school?\' when it comes to my introduction.

>>I think it is inappropriate to give my personal information during an introduction like \"Where I\'m from? or What school I go to?\".

You already know that i almost graduated from one of best universities in Korea, majoring in political science.
>>You already know that I have almost graduated from the best university in Korea, majoring in political science.
I\'m a boy.

>>CORRECT!

Even though i am literally at the age of 25, i think i need to grow up in terms of my mentality.

>>I\'m literally 25 years old, but I think I need to grow up mentally.

When i\'m lying on my bed within my house, the deep and strong worries and fears passed by me.

>>When I was lying on a bed in my house, deep and strong worries and fears passed by.

My future still blur.

>>My future is still a blur.

OR: My future is still hazy.

Where am i going?

>>Where am I going?

Where to begin?

>>Where should I begin?

What is my roadmap about my life?

>>What is my roadmap for my life?

 A lot of thoughts has floated in my heart.

>>Many thoughts came to my mind.

These days, i am living like that.

>>That\'s how I live these days.

Dive into huge deliberation.

>>I am diving into a huge deliberation.

I sometimes got depressed and frustrated.

>>Sometimes I feel depressed and frustrated.

However, it\'s not fully bad.

>>However, it\'s not completely bad.

 I would be one of processes to find out my way how to live.
>>I\'m going to be part of the process of figuring out how I live.
Not well constructed but this is me.

>>It\'s not well organized, but it\'s me.