Introduction of yourself
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름] ^^
A good evening and happy Friday to you. :)
Thank you for taking time in sending this composition.
Studying a language can really take time and effort, so it needs patience. :)
I hope I will be a help in your improvement.
See you! ^^
Hi Glenda
I left my job at work last August,
I am having a short breaktime.
>> I left my job last August, so I\'m having a short break.
I wanted to be fluent in English in only three months.
>> Correct
But I knew it was impossible. It was a ridiculous idea.
>> Correct
I must renew my long-term plan for studying English.
>> Correct
when mid-December end of English lessons with you, I will work again.
>> At the end of my lessons with you on mid-December, I will work again.
When that time comes, I want to change our class to evening time.
>> Correct
Have a good day!
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