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2018-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi Glenda I left my job at work last August, I am having a short breaktime. I wanted to be fluent in English in only three months. But I knew it was impossible. It was a ridiculous idea. I must renew my long-term plan for studying English. when mid-December end of English lessons with you, I will work again. When that time comes, I want to change our class to evening time. Have a good day!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름] ^^

A good evening and happy Friday to you. :)

Thank you for taking time in sending this composition.

Studying a language can really take time and effort, so it needs patience. :)

I hope I will be a help in your improvement.

See you! ^^


Hi Glenda

I left my job at work last August,
I am having a short breaktime.

>> I left my job last August, so I\'m having a short break. 
 I wanted to be fluent in English in only three months.

>> Correct
 But I knew it was impossible. It was a ridiculous idea.

>> Correct

 I must renew my long-term plan for studying English.

>> Correct
 when mid-December end of English lessons with you, I will work again.

>> At the end of my lessons with you on mid-December, I will work again.
 When that time comes, I want to change our class to evening time.
>> 
Correct
Have a good day!


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