Introduction script in interview

Hi [이름]!

I am so pleased to help you with your answers for the interview.  Let\'s practice the answers in class.  Don\'t forget to use some expressions as well.  Act naturally when you are reading ang saying the answers. 

-T. Maine

Hello, my name is [이름], and I’m forth grade. My major is environmental engineering.

>>Hello! My name is [이름] and I\'m in my fourth year in the university. My major is environmental engineering.
 My goal is to be an expert. I think environmental engineering is a complicated major of many countries’ technologies.

>>My goal is to be a professional and become an expert in this job.  I think environmental engineering is a complicated major in many countries that study technology.

 So I need to study in another advanced country. It Is why I applied this program.

>>So I need to study in an another advanced country.  That is the reason I applied for this program.
 I have many leader experiences of contests, competitions, supporters, school clubs.

>>I have many leader experiences from contests, competitions, supporters, and school clubs.
 Many people said they are comfortable with me. I can start conversation with new people, and I can easily carry out a project through good ways.

>>Many people said they are comfortable going along with me. I can start a conversation with new people and I can easily carry out a project in many good ways.
 So this skills and experiences will help me to adapt in new society.

>>So these skills and experiences will help me adapt in the new society.
 Specially, Finland education have many team project. When I face the project class, I will carry out smoothly.
>>I choose Finland because the education system has many team projects, and when I attend the class, I can carry out the activities smoothly.

I would like you to include your personality, like \"I am a diligent and passionate about my chosen career in the future.\"

And you may conclude by saying, \"These are the reasons I applied for this program.\"

You can delete that sentence which you said earlier so it won\'t be the same. :)