Introduction2^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Since I was a high school student I have learned lots of English words.
However, I've forgot them a lot.
After I got married I didn't have time to speak in English.
Now I am good at reading and writing better than listening and speaking.
So, I expect to increase my speaking and listening skills in this class.
I watch ARIRANG TV program sometimes..
It is an English Broadcasting TV system in Korea.
It's hard for me to understand . But I try to.
I read Korean-English Bible in order not to forget English,
it's effective a lot.
And it gives me help to understanding the meanings of the Bible.
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1--- Can you tell me the reason why you are looking upset?
2--- Show me the place where you put the keys.
3--Paul was an old gentleman who was my travelling companion.
4--He had several plans that had failed for making money quickly.
5---This is the wooden case in which the shopkeeper keeps his money.
강사 첨삭
HI ^_^How are you?Thank you for sending me your composition. You were able to express your feelings and thoughts well. Keep it up my dear ^-^ Just keep on watching and listening to English movies and television series. You will be able to learn a lot of things. Just keep on believing that you will be able to do it! Think positive ^_^ Take Care ^_^
T.Jane
Since I was a high school student I have learned lots of English words.
>>Correct or>>Since I was a highschool student,I learned a lot of English words.However, I\'ve forgot them a lot.
>>However, I forgot all of them.After I got married I didn\'t have time to speak in English.
>>CorrectNow I am good at reading and writing better than listening and speaking.
>>CorrectSo, I expect to increase my speaking and listening skills in this class.
>>CorrectI watch ARIRANG TV program sometimes..
>>CorrectIt is an English Broadcasting TV system in Korea.
>>CorrectIt\'s hard for me to understand .
>>Correct
But I try to.
>>But I try mny best to understand the words.I read Korean-English Bible in order not to forget English,
>>Correctit\'s effective a lot.
>>It\'s really effective.And it gives me help to understanding the meanings of the Bible.
>>It helps me to understand the meaning of the words in the Bible.------------------------------------------------1--- Can you tell me the reason why you are looking upset?
>>Correct2--- Show me the place where you put the keys.
>>Correct3--Paul was an old gentleman who was my travelling companion.
>>Paul who was an old gentleman was my travelling companion.4--He had several plans that had failed for making money quickly.
>>The plans which he had for making money quickly have failed.5---This is the wooden case in which the shopkeeper keeps his money.
>>This is the wooden case where the shopkeeper keeps his money.
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