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2012-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Since I was a high school student I have learned lots of English words. However, I've forgot them a lot. After I got married I didn't have time to speak in English. Now I am good at reading and writing better than listening and speaking. So, I expect to increase my speaking and listening skills in this class. I watch ARIRANG TV program sometimes.. It is an English Broadcasting TV system in Korea. It's hard for me to understand . But I try to. I read Korean-English Bible in order not to forget English, it's effective a lot. And it gives me help to understanding the meanings of the Bible. ------------------------------------------------ 1--- Can you tell me the reason why you are looking upset? 2--- Show me the place where you put the keys. 3--Paul was an old gentleman who was my travelling companion. 4--He had several plans that had failed for making money quickly. 5---This is the wooden case in which the shopkeeper keeps his money.

강사 첨삭

HI ^_^How are you?Thank you for sending me your composition. You were able to express your feelings and thoughts well. Keep it up my dear ^-^ Just keep on watching and listening to English movies and television series. You will be able to learn a lot of things. Just keep on believing that you will be able to do it! Think positive ^_^ Take Care ^_^ T.Jane Since I was a high school student I have learned lots of English words. >>Correct or>>Since I was a highschool student,I learned a lot of English words.However, I\'ve forgot them a lot. >>However, I forgot all of them.After I got married I didn\'t have time to speak in English. >>CorrectNow I am good at reading and writing better than listening and speaking. >>CorrectSo, I expect to increase my speaking and listening skills in this class. >>CorrectI watch ARIRANG TV program sometimes.. >>CorrectIt is an English Broadcasting TV system in Korea. >>CorrectIt\'s hard for me to understand . >>Correct But I try to. >>But I try mny best to understand the words.I read Korean-English Bible in order not to forget English, >>Correctit\'s effective a lot. >>It\'s really effective.And it gives me help to understanding the meanings of the Bible. >>It helps me to understand the meaning of the words in the Bible.------------------------------------------------1--- Can you tell me the reason why you are looking upset? >>Correct2--- Show me the place where you put the keys. >>Correct3--Paul was an old gentleman who was my travelling companion. >>Paul who was an old gentleman was my travelling companion.4--He had several plans that had failed for making money quickly. >>The plans which he had for making money quickly have failed.5---This is the wooden case in which the shopkeeper keeps his money. >>This is the wooden case where the shopkeeper keeps his money.

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