Invention

2015-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

We have a lot of idea but it is difficult to make. Do you have any idea? I want to make simple invention but I want to make special invention.If you have any idea let me know.

강사 첨삭

Annyeong [이름]!^.^   Thank you for accomplishing your homework. You did a good job. If you\'ll take a look at the corrections I\'ve made, there were just minors errors. I am glad that your sentence structures are getting better. I would like to think that you are now applying the principles that you\'ve learned from our previous classes so congratulations! Chukahamnida! Uri [이름] hakseng jinja chare^.^:) But don\'t be too at ease, of course you still have to practice not just to be better but to be the best in the future, don\'t you want that to happen? You do, right?^.^(*wink*) Once again, thank you for your time and keep up the good work.^^   By the way, for now, I do not have much idea on what could be the better invention to do but I am thinking of something different. I will call that as a \"magic healer\". You will lay down on the device and it will scan your diseases or injuries then after that, the device will fix it. The process will only take for 5 minutes then after that, you are already healed.   I will soon let you know some other great inventions in our class.   ~Teacher Kris     We have a lot of idea but it is difficult to make. >>> We have a lot of ideas but it is difficult to apply. Do you have any idea? >>> CORRECT OR: >>> Do you have any suggestion? I want to make simple invention but I want to make special invention. >>> I want to invent something simple yet special. If you have any idea let me know. >>> CORRECT OR: >>> If you have any idea just let me know.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·