Inventions that will make people’s lives much easier
학생이 쓴 원문
I strongly believe that waterproof book might make humans’ lives a lot convenient. There\'s still many people who prefer paper books to e-books. Waterproof paper books will be used much more comfortably when people take a bath. I think the waterproof books will allow people to enjoy the feeling of paper books. Moreover, it will be easy to use because it does not get wet.
강사 첨삭
Hi Emily! That\'s actually a good idea! Bookworms would be thankful if these are invented.
-Teacher Elise
Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!
I strongly believe that waterproof book might make humans’ lives a lot convenient.
>>I strongly believe that waterproof books might make humans’ lives a lot convenient.
There\'s still many people who prefer paper books to e-books.
>>There\'s still many people who prefer paper books than e-books.
Waterproof paper books will be used much more comfortably when people take a bath.
>>CORRECT
I think the waterproof books will allow people to enjoy the feeling of paper books.
>>CORRECT
Moreover, it will be easy to use because it does not get wet.
>>CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.