Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statemen
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All occupations are equally honorable.I don\'t think that there are less important jobs in society. Each occupation has their role and is essential. We human have been living to cooperate each other. Inventors create develop new ideas and then create new products, whereas doctors exam patients and treat them. Doctors can\'t perform surgery without tools, machine and equipment which might be invented by a lot of scientists. Inventors, in the other hand, can be treated by doctors, if they are sick. I think that both professionals should work together to improve medical skills and equipment. They really play an important part in human progress so it is not impossible to say who is more important.
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All occupations are equally honorable.
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I don\'t think that there are less important jobs in society.
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Each occupation has their role and is essential.
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We human have been living to cooperate with each other.
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Inventors create or develop new ideas and then create new products, whereas doctors examine patients and treat them.
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Doctors can\'t perform surgeries without tools, machine and equipment which might be invented by a lot of scientists.
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Inventors, on the other hand, can be treated by other doctors, if they are sick.
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I think that both professions should work together to improve medical skills and equipment.
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They really play an important part in human progress so it is not impossible to say who is more important.
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