invertion

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I was so sorry for him.

>>Correct

Or>> I felt sorry for him.

So after that I always stayed by the child.

>> After that, I always stay close to the child.

After my elder sister came to me, I told him the truth, and luckily I heard that it was okay because I was not hurt.

>> When my elder sister confronted me, I told her the truth and luckily she said that it was fine because I was not hurt.

After this incident, I thought that I wanted to make an invention that would allow parents to know if the children were crying.

>> After this incident, I wanted to make an invention that would allow parents to know if their children were crying.
Nowadays, various inventions are coming out, and I hope that many inventions can help someone.

>> Nowadays, various inventions are coming out and I hope that many inventions can help someone.

If other people are happy with such an invention, the inventor is likely to be happy.

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