Investigation

2010-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Dona

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I investigated 3 reastraunt's owners regarding the local election candidates. 3 candidates charged their meal's payment to reimburse their spending to our election commission . We guess they made false report of their meal's spending. That's why we investigated the reastrauts to know the truth. The restraunt's owners disliked our visit. They said to me that they just sold our lunch,dinner for the guests to make money."Candidates just made false reports of their spending to refund more money". I explained them to want to know the fact related truth.After my explanations, they started to coordinate our investigation.

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I investigated 3 reastraunt's owners regarding the local election candidates.

>>I investigated 3 restaurant owners regarding the local election candidacy.

3 candidates charged their meal's payment to reimburse their spending to our election commission .

>>Three candidates charged their meal payments for reimbursement in spending to our election commission. (In starting a sentence with a number, spell the number, do not write the figure.)

We guess they made false report of their meal's spending.

>> We guess they made false reports of their meal spending.

That's why we investigated the reastrauts to know the truth.

>> That's why we investigated the restaurants to know the truth.

>>That is

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