Invisible
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If you are invisible for one day, what will you do and why?
Um, First i will go my friends home. and see how to study best.
Second i will go secret room in museum.
Last i didn't think about this. so i couldn't find a lot^>^
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Hello [이름],
Thank you for making a composition today. See you later in class.
T.Janette
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If you are invisible for one day, what will you do and why?>>Correct!Um, First i will go my friends home. and see how to study best.
>>First, I will go to my friends house and try to observe his study habits that would benefit me.Second i will go secret room in museum.
>>Second, I will go to the secret room on the museum.Last i didn\'t think about this. so i couldn\'t find a lot^>^
>>Lastly, I haven\'t thought about this. I couldn\'t figure out what it is yet.^>^
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