invitations
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually accept invitations from close friends or family - like birthdsys,weddings, or small get- togethers -especially l mean a lot to them.
I accept invitations to social events where I can meet new people, learn something new or simply enjoy meaningful conversations.
On the other hand. I tend to decline invitations when I\'m not close to the person if I\'m feeling overwhelmed or if the event doesn\'t suit my values or schedule.
I typically decline parties or large gathings where there\'s excessive drinking, loud environments.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! You’re open to fun and new experiences, but not just for the sake of going out. If it doesn’t feel right or it’s too much, you’re okay with saying no, and that’s actually really healthy. Loud parties and heavy drinking aren’t for everyone, and it’s cool that you stick to what feels good for you.
-T. Sonny
I usually accept invitations from close friends or family - like birthdsys,weddings, or small get- togethers -especially l mean a lot to them.
>>I usually accept invitations from close friends or family, like birthdays, weddings, or small get-togethers, especially when I mean a lot to them.
I accept invitations to social events where I can meet new people, learn something new or simply enjoy meaningful conversations.
I accept invitations to social events where I can meet new people, learn something new or simply enjoy meaningful conversations.
>>Correct!
On the other hand. I tend to decline invitations when I\'m not close to the person if I\'m feeling overwhelmed or if the event doesn\'t suit my values or schedule.
On the other hand. I tend to decline invitations when I\'m not close to the person if I\'m feeling overwhelmed or if the event doesn\'t suit my values or schedule.
>>On the other hand, I tend to decline invitations when I’m not close to the person, when I’m feeling overwhelmed, or when the event doesn’t suit my values or schedule.
I typically decline parties or large gathings where there\'s excessive drinking, loud environments.
I typically decline parties or large gathings where there\'s excessive drinking, loud environments.
>>I typically decline parties or large gatherings with excessive drinking or loud environments.
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