Invite people in a party
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If I held a party, I would invite people who has a friendship with me. However the origin purpose of holding a party might be making a friend. So I want to invite half of known people and others. It would be a reasonable ratio of people to enjoy a party. I don\'t have much experience named party, but I enjoy meeting my friend with alcohol. It wouldn\'t be called party but it\'s same because you enjoy with people whom you like.
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Hi John!
Thank you for always working hard.
The details of your work are outstanding.
Let\'s work on clarity the next time.
Review all corrections.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I held a party, I would invite people who has a friendship with me.
>> If I host a party, I would invite people whom I\'m friendly with.
However the origin purpose of holding a party might be making a friend.
>> However the ultimate purpose of hosting a party might be to make a friend.
So I want to invite half of known people and others.
>> That\'s why half the people in my party would be people whom I know and the other half would be others whom I don\'t.
It would be a reasonable ratio of people to enjoy a party.
>> Correct
I don\'t have much experience named party, but I enjoy meeting my friend with alcohol.
>> I don\'t have much experience with parties but I enjoy meeting my friends for drinking alcohol.
It wouldn\'t be called party but it\'s same because you enjoy with people whom you like.
>> It wouldn\'t be called a party but it\'s the same because you enjoy with people whom you like.
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