iron man
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I think it is iron man because in the end-game iron man save half of humans and also very cool.
In end-game iron man sacrificed himself to people. so iron man is most greatest hero. Also he have a doter but forget her and fight for people.
Iron man is also cool and funny i\'m impressed by what he did.
That\'s the reason why I think iron man is most greatest super hero.
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Thank you for this [이름]. That\'s reasonable enough for you to say so.
>>> I think it is Ironman because in the end-game he saved half of the human race and also he was very cool.
In end-game iron man sacrificed himself to people. so iron man is most greatest hero.
>>> In end-game, Ironman sacrificed himself for the people so he is the greatest hero.
Also he have a doter but forget her and fight for people.
>>> Also, he has a daughter but forgot about her and fought for the people.
Iron man is also cool and funny i\'m impressed by what he did.
>>> Iron man is also cool and funny. I\'m impressed by what he did.
That\'s the reason why I think iron man is most greatest super hero.
>>> That\'s the reason why I think Ironman is the greatest superhero.
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