Is a perfect society possible?
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I think perfect society is impossible.
>> I think a perfect society is impossible.
First of all, nobody is perfect.
>> CORRECT!
What I mean is that perfect people can make perfect society but if people are not perfect, they cannot make perfect society.
>> What I mean is that, perfect people can make a perfect society but if people are not perfect, they cannot make a perfect society.
God didn\'t make perfect person.
>> God didn\'t make a perfect person.
Also,there haven\'t been a perfect society in history.
>> Also,there hasn\'t been a perfect society in history.
Every society always has problems like environmental pollution, economical situations and law of slavery and so on.
>> Every society always has problems like environmental pollution, economical problems, slavery and so on.
It means there is no perfect society in the world.
>> CORRECT!
We usually expect perfect society waching our history back, it proves perfect society is impossible.
>> We usually expect for a perfect society and looking to our history, it proves that a perfect society is impossible.
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