Is aging more difficult for men or women? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Everyone geetting old is sad.
I think both are difficult.
When you get old, have a lot of sick and have a lot of medicine.
And used Cosmetics is more and more expensive.
Emotional changes get worse.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Soolyn! I like your honest answers. Whatever happens, let us age gracefully.-Faith-
Everyone geetting old is sad.>> Everyone getting old is sad.
I think both are difficult.
>> CORRECT
When you get old, have a lot of sick and have a lot of medicine.
I think both are difficult.
>> CORRECT
When you get old, have a lot of sick and have a lot of medicine.
>> When you get old, you get several kinds of sickness and you need to take many types of medicines.
And used Cosmetics is more and more expensive.
>> Also, cosmetics get more expensive.
Emotional changes get worse.
And used Cosmetics is more and more expensive.
>> Also, cosmetics get more expensive.
Emotional changes get worse.
>> Finally, emotional changes get worse.
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