Is aging more difficult for men or women? Why?
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Seriously? I\'ve never heard about it. However, I know the one thing you know? that Westerners age faster than Asians because they have fewer melanin cells than Asians. Anyway, I don\'t know what\'s difficult age between men and women.
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Seriously? I\'ve never heard about it. However, I know the one thing you know?
>> Seriously? I\'ve never heard about it. However, I know the one thing.
that Westerners age faster than Asians because they have fewer melanin cells than Asians.
>> Westerners age faster than Asians because they have fewer melanin cells than Asians.
Anyway, I don\'t know what\'s difficult age between men and women.
>> Anyway, I don\'t know what\'s difficult about age between men and women.
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