Is aging more difficult for men or women? Why?

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Although aging is a concern for both sexes, women are more concerned and sensitive about aging than men.

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Everyone wants to hear that they look younger than their age and other people of their own age. 

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As women want to look attractive, they get stressed out by aging, which could be a natural instinct.

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These days, not only women but also more and more young generation tends to focus on their appearance.

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>> OR: These days, not only women also younger generation who are focused on their appearance increases.

This is a noticeable change compared to old days.

>> Better: This is a noticeable change compared to the old days.

Today’s society forces people to indulge in making themselves look better.

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All the media like TV, newspapers, movies, or magazines are only featuring good looking celebrities.

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Bad apples should not be put on the shelves.

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People are greatly influenced by such commercialized advertisements and films.

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However, men seem to have an easier time dealing with the hallmarks of passing years than women.

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We have to be aware that aging is a natural thing and many people overwhelmingly have a much more positive view towards aging and getting older.

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