Is anger ever a bad thing? If so, when? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Anger could become good inner motivation.
For example, Micheal Jordan, the former basketball player, he is famous using a anger in his match to win.
He imagined a fake situation to recall anger.
However if someone show the anger to others, it is a bad thing.
강사 첨삭
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Anger could become good inner motivation.
>> Anger can become a powerful inner motivation.
For example, Micheal Jordan, the former basketball player, he is famous using a anger in his match to win.
>> For example, Michael Jordan, the former basketball player, is famous for using anger in his games to win.
He imagined a fake situation to recall anger.
>> He would imagine fake situations to trigger his anger.
However if someone show the anger to others, it is a bad thing.
>> However, showing anger to others is a negative behavior.
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