Is anyone you know celebrating a birthday this fall season? What do you think is the best way to cel

2024-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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My mom\'s birthday is on November 10th, so my family will celebrate in this fall. I think the best way to celebrate is a gift of flowers.

강사 첨삭

Hello again, Yale!

Here\'s your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided.

By the way, even though it\'s a holiday in Korea on Wednesday, 15 August, we still have classes as usual on that day, so it\'s not a holiday for our class, unless you put your class on hold or cancel it. So good night and see you on Wednesday! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                    Is anyone you know celebrating a birthday this fall season? What do you think is the best way to celebrate a birthday in the fall?


My mom\'s birthday is on November 10th, so my family will celebrate in this fall.
>> My mom\'s birthday is on November 10th so my family will celebrate this fall.

I think the best way to celebrate is a gift of flowers.
>> I think the best way to celebrate is to give flowers as a gift. 

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