Is beauty only in the eye of the beholder, or can we say some things are universally beautiful?
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[이름],
I will never be beautiful in Korea then. According to your standard, the only thing I have that is pretty are my eyes because they\'re big. Thank God I was born with big eyes.(\",)
~Lynn
I don\'t agree with that there are universally beatiful things.
>> I don\'t agree that there are universally beautiful things.
It is because there are a lot of viewpoints about beauty all over the world and present beutiful things can be changed.
>> It is because there are a lot of viewpoints about beauty all over the world and the present beutiful things can be changed.
For example, babies are really lovely, but they can be changed when they grow up.
>> For example, babies are really lovely, but they can change when they grow up.
Beautiful nature can be destroyed by humans, too.
>> correct!
There are a lot of different viewpoints about beatuy, for example, beautiful nature, beautiful love, beautiful appearance and so on.
>> correct!
However, I want to say someting in terms of beautiful appearance this time.
>> correct!
In Korea, a standard of beautiful women is really strict.
>> In Korea, the standard of beautiful women is really strict.
There are some standards of beauty such as big eyes with double eyelid, bright skin and so on, but the most important condition of a beautiful woman is skinny body.
>> correct!
Many women get stress from losing weight.
>> correct!
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