Is being a vegetarian healthy?
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I think that the vegetarian are healty.
Unsaturated fat products are healthier for our body .
Vegetabes and grains are all unsaturated fat.
I know a person. She is vegetarian and she doesn\'t eat meat.
She is short and thin but she never saw a doctor.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Julia!
Thank you for your diligence in writing your thought.
I would agree that your food source will determine if you are healthy or not. Would you be a vegetarian in the future?
Have a great day :)
Aki~
Aki~
I think that the vegetarian are healty.
>>> I think that vegetarians are healthy.
Unsaturated fat products are healthier for our body .
>>> Unsaturated fat products are healthier for our bodies.
Vegetables and grains are all unsaturated fat.
>>> CORRECT!
I know a person. She is a vegetarian and she doesn\'t eat meat.
>>> CORRECT!
She is short and thin but she never saw a doctor.
>>> She is short and thin but she never see a doctor.
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