Is being single less stressful than married life? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each?
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Socrates said “it doesn’t not matter if you get married or not. Do it or don’t do it, you will regret it either way.” I think that it is true. If you are single, you will wish to stay together with your significant other. If you get married, you would miss the times when you are single. When you are single, you have freedom to whatever you want to do. You could sleep in, watch TV all day, drink with your friend all night, enjoy being alone at night with listening to music and thinking over your life, and so on. You do not need to be bothered by your wife’s nagging. You do not have to worry about what mood you wife are in. However, there are a lot of things that you will miss when you remain single. You won’t have time to have a small talk with your wife over dinner table. You will never listen to your kids’ laughing. Marriage can provide you with a long term commitment, security and support. Happiness does not come from any big achivement, but from small things.
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Good day Sir [이름]!
Happy Thursday!
How\'s the weather in Korea?
I was able to learn something from you again.
I totally agree with you. But I have a question, why do you think there are still people who don\'t want to get married?
What are their reasons? Can you please answer these questions in class.
I hope that you will have an easy day. Talk to you soon.
Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Socrates said “it doesn’t not matter if you get married or not.
>> Socrates said, \"It doesn\'t matter if you get married or not\".
Do it or don’t do it, you will regret it either way.”
>> Correct!
I think that it is true.
>> Correct!
If you are single, you will wish to stay together with your significant other.
>> Correct!
>> OR: If you are single, you will wish to stay together with your love one.
If you get married, you would miss the times when you are single.
>> Correct!
When you are single, you have freedom to whatever you want to do.
>> When you are single, you have the freedom to do whatever you want to.
You could sleep in, watch TV all day, drink with your friend all night, enjoy being alone at night with listening to music and thinking over your life, and so on.
>> You could sleep in, watch TV all day, drink with your friend all night, enjoy being alone at night while listening to music and thinking over your life, and so on.
>> OR: You could have sleep overs, watch TV all day, drink with your friends all night, enjoy being alone at night while listening to music and thinking over your life, and so on.
You do not need to be bothered by your wife’s nagging.
>> Correct!
You do not have to worry about what mood you wife are in.
>> Did you mean: You don\'t have to worry about what your wife\'s mood.
However, there are a lot of things that you will miss when you remain single.
>> Correct!
You won’t have time to have a small talk with your wife over dinner table.
>> Correct!
You will never listen to your kids’ laughing.
>> You can\'t hear your kids laughing.
Marriage can provide you with a long term commitment, security and support.
>> Correct!
Happiness does not come from any big achivement, but from small things.
>> Correct!
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