Is bribery a big problem in your country?

Happy Monday Sir [이름]!

I am aware about your country\'s history of bribery and the only thing I am not aware of are the changes happen after that. Yes, it\'s a tough society that even the strongest and the most powerful person can\'t eradicate the corruption from the system of politics instantly. It is well-established like roots of a tree. Nevertheless, the future generations will step up. Hats off to you!

~Teacher Eunice

Two ex-presidents in Korea have already been arrested and jailed lately.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: There were two former presidents who had been plead guilty for bribery. 
 Of course,the bribery in Korea is a big problem.

>>> Of course, bribery in Korea is a big problem.

>>> OR: Bribery has been a big problem in South Korea.
In the past year, people thought that it was no problem if our life is getting better, even though there was a corruption from politicians who are running our nation.

>>> In the past years, people thought that it is not a problem if our life is getting better, even though there are corrupted politicians who are running our nation. 

However, people hope making a clear society these days.

>>> However, people are hoping to make a clean society these days.
 That\'s why many people over the nation came to the street for impeachment of former president and then we succeed to impeach her.
>>> That\'s why many people over the nation came to the street for the impeachment of the former president, and we succeed to impeach her.  

I was the one who support the policy of government that are improving our life first but I have changed my mind to make a clear society.

>>> I was the one who supported the policy of the government for improving our lives first, but I have changed my mind to make a clean society.

>>> OR: I was one of the people who supported the government to improve our lives and to have a peaceful society.  
I believe that Korea will be the best country to live in the world.

>>> Correct!