Is cooking a social activity for you? Do you like to do it with other people, or do your prefer to d
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Cooking is what makes hungry people eat.
In community service, I would have to cook with others,
If it is small, I can do it myself.
I like cooking. I usually eat at home rather than eating out
Except for special cases.
Koreans like to have plenty of food.
Japanese people like colorful food.
Americans seek nutrition.
I often like to invite guests to my home to enjoy food and tea and make cooking easily and quickly.
The occasional party in our little garden is mainly I cook.
I have never participated in the cooking of social activities in the government.
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Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Check below for the corrections. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
In community service, I would have to cook with others,
>>When participating in a community service, I would have to cook with others,
If it is small, I can do it myself.
If it is small, I can do it myself.
>>CORRECT!
I like cooking. I usually eat at home rather than eating out Except for special cases.
I like cooking. I usually eat at home rather than eating out Except for special cases.
>>I like cooking. I usually eat at home rather than eating out except for special occasions.
Koreans like to have plenty of food.
Koreans like to have plenty of food.
>>CORRECT!
Japanese people like colorful food.
Japanese people like colorful food.
>>CORRECT!
Americans seek nutrition.
>>CORRECT!
I often like to invite guests to my home to enjoy food and tea and make cooking easily and quickly.
I often like to invite guests to my home to enjoy food and tea and make cooking easily and quickly.
>>I often like to invite guests to my home to enjoy food and tea and for me to cook something easy and quick.
The occasional party in our little garden is mainly I cook.
The occasional party in our little garden is mainly I cook.
>>The occasional party in our little garden is mainly the time when I cook.
I have never participated in the cooking of social activities in the government.
I have never participated in the cooking of social activities in the government.
>>I have never participated in the cooking for social activities by the government.
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