Is creativity being lost in modern education systems?
학생이 쓴 원문
Creativity in modern education systems is being lost. First, These day focused study based on exam and education. So student are forced to get a good score on test so they don\'t have time to focus on creativity. Second, Modern education is concentrated on memorizing things. Still, we study and memorize the concept and standardized learning. Last, We don\'t have class to talk our thoughts in class, so we can\'t increase our creativity. For example, drawing and music class is getting decrease. I think these classes can help our creativity.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]~ I really agree with your idea. It’s true that when students are always pressured to get high scores, they have less time to explore new ideas or express themselves freely. A more balanced education system would definitely help students become more creative and confident in expressing their thoughts.
-Teacher Sonny
Creativity in modern education systems is being lost.
>>Correct!
First, These day focused study based on exam and education.
>>First, these days education is focused on exams and test-based learning.
So student are forced to get a good score on test so they don\'t have time to focus on creativity.
>>So students are forced to get good scores on tests, so they don’t have time to focus on creativity.
Second, Modern education is concentrated on memorizing things.
>>Second, modern education is concentrated on memorizing things.
Still, we study and memorize the concept and standardized learning.
>>We still study and memorize concepts and standardized learning.
Last, We don\'t have class to talk our thoughts in class, so we can\'t increase our creativity.
>>Lastly, we don’t have classes to share our thoughts, so we can’t improve our creativity.
For example, drawing and music class is getting decrease.
>>For example, drawing and music classes are decreasing.
I think these classes can help our creativity.
>>I think these classes can help improve our creativity.
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