Is creativity needed more than ever in the world today?
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I think we need many creative until today, because we have to make many things until today,We have to make many eelectric equipment.I think we have so many things too make. I think many creative things are good
to use it
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I think we need many creative until today, because we have to make many things until today,
>> I think we must be creative because we have to make many things today.
We have to make many eelectric equipment.I think we have so many things too make. We have I think many creative things are good to use it
>> We have to create electric equipment and others. We have to think about the advantage and convenience it will give to people.
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