Is Cyber-security important? How is your country trying to keep cyberspace safe? How much privacy sh

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for writing this great essay.
It is true that in information age, it is difficult to protect our privacy.

In addition, it\'s also very easy to steal information.
Cyber-security has become of great importance over the years.
I hope you\'re safe and happy.
See you again on our next class. :)
~Teacher Charry

>> Cyber-security is important because we are now living in an information age.

>> We enter our personal information and other valuable information into the computer to use any site.

>> If everyone fails to keep cyber-security, everyone else\'s personal information could be leaked and misused in crimes.

>> CORRECT!

>> [Do you mean]: Finally, we are giving up almost all of our privacy the moment we leave our house. When we are at home, we want to prevent crimes.