Is digital art as valuable as traditional painting or sculpture?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I think digital art as valuable as traditional art.
But something you like is totally different from something you feel valued.
There is no worthless art, but it\'s just chosen by preference.
강사 첨삭
You expressed a thoughtful and balanced opinion, emphasizing that value in art is subjective. Your distinction between personal preference and true value is insightful and shows critical thinking. To improve, focus on grammar for verb forms (is as valuable), and more natural phrasing (consider valuable). Overall, your answer is concise, clear, and meaningful, very well done!
-Teacher Wela
Yes. I think digital art as valuable as traditional art.
>> Yes, I think digital art is as valuable as traditional art.
But something you like is totally different from something you feel valued.
>> However, something you like is different from something you consider valuable.
There is no worthless art, but it\'s just chosen by preference.
>> No art is worthless; it is simply a matter of personal preference.
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