Is divorce common in your country? How do people think about divorce?
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In the past, a divorce was thought bad thing and embarrassed thing in a society.
Obviously, un-divorce couple are much more than divorce couple. However, these days, a divorce is common in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing your ideas about divorce in South Korea. The dissolution of a marriage is almost always an upsetting event but there are many factors why couples decide to end their marriage.
~Kelly
>> In the past, divorce was thought bad thing and an embarrassing thing in society.
Obviously, un-divorce couple are much more than divorce couple.
Obviously, un-divorce couple are much more than divorce couple.
>> Obviously, there were more undivorced couples than divorced couples.
However, these days, a divorce is common in Korea.
>> However, these days, divorce is common in Korea.
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