Is domestic violence a big problem in your country?
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At the Previous generation, that\'s not a big deal, people didn\'t care about it. Like when you walked around the street to see a child violenced by their parents. And then you shouldn\'t do any act, because of their home education. But now it\'s been changed. A big issue that we\'ve faced is a domestic violence. Also that comes with child abuse.
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At the Previous generation, that\'s not a big deal, people didn\'t care about it.
>> Long time ago, domestic violence is not a major problem in my country. People didn\'t even care about it.
Like when you walked around the street to see a child violenced by their parents. And then you shouldn\'t do any act, because of their home education.
>> For example, when you see a kid being hit by their parents on the street you shouldn\'t do anything about it because that is their own way of disciplining their children.
But now it\'s been changed. A big issue that we\'ve faced is a domestic violence. Also that comes with child abuse.
>> But today, everything has been changed. Domestic violence, specifically child abuse is one of biggest problem in our country.
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