Is falling birth rate a problem in your country? How do you think this will be solved?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think my country are living many peole in capital.
Then house prices is increasing now.
And we don\'t get a job easily.It\'s difficult.
we have to away from capital.but we are love seoul so much. ha ha
I know.Most the countries aren\'t development than capital area.
we can\'t be solved.Maybe later If the president change.It can solved at least.
강사 첨삭
Hi JO!
You\'re right! The capital city of every country is usually crowded and have high cost of living.
I am glad that I lived and grew up outside our capital city. My city is far better than our capital. Haha!
Here are the corrections.
I think my country are living many peole in capital.
>> I think my country has many people in the capital city.
Then house prices is increasing now.
>> Then, house price is increasing now.
And we don\'t get a job easily.It\'s difficult.
>> And, we don\'t get a job easily. It\'s difficult.
we have to away from capital.but we are love seoul so much. ha ha
>> We have to move away from the capital. But, we love Seoul so much. Haha!
I know.Most the countries aren\'t development than capital area.
>> I know. Most countries don\'t develop their capital area.
we can\'t be solved.Maybe later If the president change.It can solved at least.
>> We can\'t solve it. Maybe later, if the president will be changed, it will be at least solved.
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