Is firefighting a well-paid job in your country?

2024-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Absolutely not, it\'s a not well-paid and fair job like Power English in my country. For example, in an emergency situation, firefighters should go to a place where it happens to fire. However, if there is a car which blocks in the road, they can\'t go through there. I know they have to work for a self-esteem because of not a well-paid. And, their equipment, fire fighting garment, and etc are very old version. Also, most people don\'t respect them in my country. I saw the news that they went to the scene of fire, residents complained about a volume of the siren. It\'s a too stupid thing. And, I have a funny thing story. It\'s good to expect it. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Absolutely not, it\'s a not well-paid and fair job like Power English in my country. 
>> Absolutely not, it\'s not a well-paid and fair job like Power English in my country. 
For example, in an emergency situation, firefighters should go to a place where it happens to fire.
>> For example, in an emergency situation, firefighters should go to the place where the fire happens.
However, if there is a car which blocks in the road, they can\'t go through there. 
>> However, if there is a car which blocks the road, they can\'t go through there. 
I know they have to work for a self-esteem because of not a well-paid. 
>> I know they have to work for self-esteem because of not a well-paid job
And, their equipment, fire fighting garment, and etc are the very old version. 
>> CORRECT!
Also, most people don\'t respect them in my country. 
>> CORRECT!
I saw the news that they went to the scene of fire, residents complained about a volume of the siren. 
>> I saw the news that they went to the scene of fire, residents complained about the volume of the siren. 
It\'s a too stupid thing.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s quite a stupid thing to complain about.
And, I have a funny story. 
>> CORRECT!
It\'s good to expect it. :)
>> CORRECT!

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