Is fishing an important industry in your country? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Fishing is an important industry in our country. Because we encounter a lot of fish. Also, you can\'t eat seaweed without fishing. Other Korean dishes will disappear without fishing. And if we don\'t have fishing, we should only eat rice.
강사 첨삭
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Fishing is an important industry in our country.
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Because we encounter a lot of fish.
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Also, you can\'t eat seaweed without fishing.
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Other Korean dishes will disappear without fishing.
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And if we don\'t have fishing, we should only eat rice.
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