Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?
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Basically it is. However, we have to consider some requirement of the citizen who speaks freely. It is the same aspect with the fact that the freedom doesn't mean indulgence. In other words, a person who speak freely of something should take responsibility of the thing that he speaks. The church that I attend has a little parking space, as compared to my church members. So some leaders suggest us to use the public transportations such as subway and bus when we come to church on Sundays. It is a good sugggestion because too many people who use their car in church may bring a lof of congestion and trouble to other church members and the neighbors. However, we could not have any restriction to car-users because it's just suggestion and we live in a free society. However, if the church members could find a leader who insist using bus driving a car to the church, we may not blame him officially because it is his freedom. Instead, we wouldn't listen to him any more.
강사 첨삭
Freedom of speech thereby symbolizes nation\'s freedom~
If we are free to express what we want, it means that we live in a democratic country, free from oppressive rules.
However, freedom of speech is sometimes abused.
Have a great Thursday, Miss [이름]!
Basically it is.
>>CORRECT!
However, we have to consider some requirement of the citizen who speaks freely.
>>However, we have to consider some requirements of a citizen who wish to speak freely. It is the same aspect with the fact that the freedom doesn\'t mean indulgence.
>>It is the same with the fact that freedom doesn\'t mean indulgence. In other words, a person who speak freely of something should take responsibility of the thing that he speaks.
>> In other words, a person who speaks freely of something should take responsibility for whatever he says.The church that I attend has a little parking space, as compared to my church members.
>>The church where I go to has a little parking space insufficient for us church members.
So some leaders suggest us to use the public transportations such as subway and bus when we come to church on Sundays.
>>So some leaders suggest using the public transportation such as the subway and the bus when we come to the church on Sundays.
It is a good sugggestion because too many people who use their car in church may bring a lof of congestion and trouble to other church members and the neighbors.
>>It is a good sugggestion because too many people who use their car may bring about congestion and trouble to other church members and the neighbors.
However, we could not have any restriction to car-users because it\'s just suggestion and we live in a free society.
>>However, we could not have any restrictions to car users because it\'s just a suggestion and we live in a free society. However, if the church members could find a leader who insist using bus driving a car to the church, we may not blame him officially because it is his freedom. Instead, we wouldn\'t listen to him any more.
>>However, if the church members find a leader who insists on using a bus or driving a car to the church, we may not blame him officially because it is his freedom.
Instead, we wouldn\'t listen to him any more.
>>Instead, we wouldn\'t listen to him anymore.
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