Is getting angry an effective way of dealing with problems?

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Here are my corrections for you:

I disagree with that statement because there is nothing changing even if I get angry. 

>> I disagree with that statement because nothing will change even if I get angry. 

Only my emotions are getting worse so I might deal with this problem emotionally. 

>> CORRECT!

If there is a problem, the most important thing is to keep calm and try to think from an objective perspective. 

>> CORRECT!

I also think that wise people accept every given situation positively. 

>> CORRECT!

So I don\'t think getting angry helps solve a problem in a wise way.

>> CORRECT!