Is getting angry an effective way of dealing with problems?

2022-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Getting angry can be a way to relieve stress, however, getting angry can not deal with problems because it only makes the relationship worse and even offends others emotionally. Therefore, if you want to deal with some problems, you need to cool yourself.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rana!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Getting angry can be a way to relieve stress, however, getting angry can not deal with problems because it only makes the relationship worse and even offends others emotionally. 

>> Getting angry can be a way to relieve stress, however, getting angry can not be a way to deal with problems because it only makes the relationship worse and even offends others emotionally. 

Therefore, if you want to deal with some problems, you need to cool yourself.

>> CORRECT!

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