Is getting angry an effective way of dealing with problems?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hi there! Happy New Year!
Have a nice holiday!
Homework: Is getting angry an effective way of dealing with problems?
I think getting angry is bad way. The most important thing is talk about key point.
It\'s not tell right from wrong. First of all understand the cause and effect. And then find a solution.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tony! Happy New Year!
Until the next one!
See you next year! :)
~Teacher Sheila ^_^
I think getting angry is bad way.
>>I think getting angry is a bad way.
The most important thing is talk about key point.
>>The most important thing is talking about key points.
>>The most important thing is talking about key points.
OR>>The most important thing is discussing the key points.
It\'s not tell right from wrong.
>>It\'s not telling right from wrong.
OR>>It\'s not about who is right and who is wrong.
First of all understand the cause and effect.
>>First of all, understand the cause and effect.
And then find a solution.
>>CORRECT
OR>>And then, find the solutions.
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