Is getting angry an effective way of dealing with problems?
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I think it isn\'t an effective way of dealing with problems.
But since I\'m a human, I sometimes get angry.
If we get angry, it is an effective way to talk to the other person calmly and kindly about things you don\'t like.
Also, it is important to listen to the other person\'s opinion and don\'t show anger.
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Hello [이름]! :)
But since I\'m a human, I sometimes get angry.
If we get angry, it is an effective way to talk to the other person calmly and kindly about things you don\'t like.
Also, it is important to listen to the other person\'s opinion and don\'t show anger.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I think it isn\'t an effective way of dealing with problems.
>> CORRECT!
But since I\'m a human, I sometimes get angry.
>> CORRECT!
If we get angry, it is an effective way to talk to the other person calmly and kindly about things you don\'t like.
>> CORRECT!
Also, it is important to listen to the other person\'s opinion and don\'t show anger.
>> CORRECT!
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