Is getting angry an effective way of dealing with the problems?
학생이 쓴 원문
Absolutelly not. Getting angry doesn\'t help solving the problems. In order to solve the problems, We usaully need to have a break time to relax. On the other [이름]ds, keep suppressing an angry, it will make a disease of our mind. So, sometimes we have to express about the angry for decreasing stress. The best way to solve the problems is to do what you want to do.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]suk! T[이름]k you for doing another homework today! Great work! I understood the things that you want me to understand however be careful in making sentences. Double check your sentences if your sentences are organized well. Until the next one! Also, see to it that you are using the correct articles in your sentences. :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>Absolutely not.
Getting angry doesn\'t help solving the problems.
>>Getting angry doesn\'t help in solving the problem.
OR>>Getting angry doesn\'t help in solving problems.
In order to solve the problems, We usaully need to have a break time to relax.
>>In order to solve problems, we usually need to have a break time to relax.
On the other [이름]ds, keep suppressing an angry, it will make a disease of our mind.
>>On the other [이름]d, continuously suppressing our anger will bring us diseases in our brain.
OR>>On the other [이름]d, suppressing our anger will make us think a lot and it will bring troubles on our mind.
So, sometimes we have to express about the angry for decreasing stress.
>>So, sometimes we have to express our anger to decrease our stresses.
The best way to solve the problems is to do what you want to do.
>>The best way to solve problems is to do what you want to do.
OR>>The best way to solve a problem is to do what you want to do.
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