Is going on a solo trip part of your bucket list? Why or why not?
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Yes. I want to go on a solo trip. Because it has an advantage to go wherever I can go. But, going on a solo trip is danger. So, If I go on trip, I will go to safe country like Japan,Singapore.
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Thank you for answering your homework!
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. Yes. I want to go on a solo trip.
>> Yes, I want to go on a solo trip.
2. Because it has an advantage to go wherever I can go.
>>It\'s advantage is that I can just go wherever I want to go.
3. But, going on a solo trip is danger.
>>However, going on a solo trip is dangerous.
4. So, If I go on trip, I will go to safe country like Japan,Singapore.
>>So, If I go on a trip, I will go to safe countries like Japan and Singapore.
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